Tuesday, 10 January 2012

journals


Q) Write a two day journal of 120-150 words, where you are lost and are in need of help
Keeping the following points in mind.

  • You are alone.
  • Without food and shelter
  • You have a pocket knife.
  • You are lost somewhere near water

28 comments:

  1. Yestuarday we were in a ship and i slept so after i woke up i was in a jungle and there was noone around me and i was in a dark black jungle and alone and that was near water and there i saw a grocery crate full of food but i was having pocket knife so i tear that and i ate some food from it(YUMMY)and got a stomach ache.....suddenly i saw a man i went near to that man and asked can u take me outside from this strange place:( He said yes i said thank u i was sitting in his car he took me in more dark so i asked where are we going he said out from this strange place but i donot believe in my heart and i had a dought that he is taking me to more strange place because of that dought i kept asking him after and after but he gave me same answer(out from this strange place.....)but after half an hour i saw a road after few minutes we got more near and clearly i saw a road and i told my way home and drop me at my home and i was shocked and unbelievable that he really drop me at my home i thanked him very much and i woked up for school...........

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  2. I am in a plane and suddenly I see a smoke which was coming from lavatory. I told one of the air hostess and then she reported to the co-pilot. But when he came to check it was too late. The plane was on fire so I heared a announcement “ladies and gentlemen due to fire and we have to land on water”. Suddenly the plane was going downwards, more than 2000 km/h was the plane’s speed. There was a sudden crash that shook me very bad and all of the passenger evacuated quickly. I was in the ocean and suddenly the plane exploded and all the passenger were blown away but not dead. Due to explosion blackout left me.
    I looked around and there was jungle everywhere. Luckly I had my watch still on which could tell date,month and year. I noticed something werid. The plane crashed on 4/12/2010 but it was 6/12/2010. Whoaaa!!! I was unconcious for 1 day. I was amazed. I was alone, near water, with no food and shelter but I have a pocket knife. I made spear by a strong wood ,vine and a rock. I sharped the rock and tied the rock and wood by vine. I made my shelter under two trees and laid some long wood so I can be above the ground or the deadly insect will bite me. I hunted lots of fish which could help me in survival.I slept in piece because I was tired.
    Next day I saw a cruise. I took two fire sticks and waved at the ship. The ship was coming towards me and I in my mind I said “Thank God I am save”. After 10 minutes the ship was at the shore and took me in the ship. The shipwas goin to Pakistan where I live. I was save. I learened a leason that “pray to Allah and your life will change.”
    Written by Syed Haris Hashmi

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  4. yesterday i went to a trip to an island by ship.When we reached the island i just saw was the big big trees of coconuts and little monkeys playing on the branches.I was staring at monkeys when i came to know that i am lost in the island.So i was thinking about my life if someone comes and kill me or i would get hunted by animals?.But for my safety i had a pocket knife and a cell phone.I stayed at night there with no shelter nor any food.At night a lion came at my place where i was sleeping.Oh gosh it was worst moment of my life and i hitted him by rocks and coconuts and he ran away.In the morning my family came to the island and took me back home.

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  5. My exams were over and my parents were planing to go Dubai we all gave our passport to travel agent after few days he said that their is a problem,only one person can go its up to you whom you will send.My father gave them my name.I was feeling bad and sad because i was going alone without my family,they sent me to airport and after 4 hours my flight was taking off.I was excited because i was on my own.After few hours we were about to reach Dubai but pilot was not aware that fuel of air plane was leaking.When he checked the fuel meter,it was finished.They announced that we are giving you parachute and you have to jump in water,i was scared,i closed my eyes and jumped in water,that was my luck that i know how to swim.
    I had to swim a long way when finally found a dry place, about the size of a small room.I lay on that small island exhausted.there was clue where the other passengers went.I was so tried that soon fell asleep and woke up the next morning.
    One whole day had had passed and I was extremely hungry.All i had was a small knife in my pocket.I went to the shore and caught some fish with my knife and had no option but to eat raw.However,eating made me feel much better and now i thought of ways to rescue my self.Suddenly,i saw a very low flying helicopter.I took off my jacket and waved,shouting simultaneously luckily they saw me and landed on the small island.I was finally rescued."

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  6. 304 words
    i am third one to post my comment.

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  7. When the papers were over our family planed to go to hogexbay where we were suppose to stay a night it was and we all went to sleep. A 3:00 am I got up early and went outside it was a little chilly we also rented a small boat for fishing I don’t know what or why I took that boat and started to row but when I went to the shore I couldn’t see our see house it was a wrong side and I couldn’t remember where I came from. There were no signals because there was no signal tower I got really scared. I went back to my oat and dragged it with me it was 3:00 pm when a took some rest and slept cause I was wary tired when I woke up it was the time of sun set I got wary worried and was wary hunger after many struggles I found a camel owner who told me the way. Thanks to that man of God I am present now.
    Written by SAIF UN NASAR

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  8. 21-5-11
    today it was our flight to London.i went to the airport with my family . we set in our aircraft.we were about to reached London but our aircraft was
    creating some sorts of problem so it caught fire in it.we were informed this . Airhoteses give us the parachute to jump.i jumped from the aircraft i was lucky that i know how to fly the parachute there were many people who died because they did not know hoe to fly the parachute . i did not got the injuries . i was feeling very scared because i was alone. over there was river around me. there were trees around the place i was trying to find the way of going out with the help of my knife.i was not able to find the way . i was very hungry with the help of my knife i eat some of the fruits.i was thinking that how i can go out from here . i saw some of the mobile phones i called the police and told everything and from the helicopter they game to take me and i went back to home

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    1. Jan 11,2012
      i went to a beach with my school mates on a school trip. we reached there around 2 in noon. As every one was really tired after having fun, they all planned to have the meal. I was really anxious to explore the caves in the small hills there so i started wandering towards the cliffs. I was lost in admiring the beautiful flowers over there and somehow i came very far from my mates.I was on the other side of the hills in a dark forest. Now I was in search of the way out there but unfortunately the way became more confusing. It was late now and i was feeling extremely hungry as i did not had my lunch too. It was becoming dark and I was scared but I gathered my strength and kept moving. Finally i found the way out. I realized that all my friends were already gone, they must not have noticed my absence in so many people. I needed something to eat, but I had nothing. I saw some fruits on trees which I never saw before , at first i thought they would be poisonous but I was so hungry that I would have eaten poisonous things as well. I cut them into pieces with my pocket knife, thank God they were not poisonous. I need to wait till tomorrow for my rescue now. I was feeling pity for my self.
      by: VARISHA ZUHAIR

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  9. is there to be a journal fr the next day to ms.sana ??

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  10. Jan 15, 2012 (9:03)

    Me and my friends went on a school trip to an island. When it was time for us to return,i thought of taking some juicy fruits with us. When i went to pick them up i realized ,y bus was leaving.
    I rushed as fast as i could throwing those fruits on the side, but i couldn't run as fast as the bus and I was totally alone in the island, it was getting cold and colder and i didn't had any clothes. With the help of a pocket knife our teachers gave us i was able to cut 2 huge leaves, and lay them over my body. When i felt hungry i picked up those fruits, because of which i was hear and ate them happily. i slept beside the big tree for the night.
    Then in the morning when i went in the water to swim and refresh myself, i heard the noise of our bus and mu friends searching for me. i was so pleased to see them that at i screamed as loud as possible and went safely with them. One thing i realized was never ever go somewhere without telling others.

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  11. My best friend birthday was taking place in South Africa.he invited me especially so my father was busy in work so he allowed me to go alone,my passport was i asked my father that i have to go to my friends birthday as having a problem so my ticket confirmed suddenly so i took only my clothes and went to airport,during flight a report came by airhostress that the fuel pipe had leaked so we have to in sea near an island, or the plain will crash, i was too scared, that i will be able to swim or not, but i jumped and reached island. i was too hungry but had nothing instead of a pocket knife, i found a coconut and cut it from my pocket knife and drunk its water and ate the coconut, suddenly i saw a ship going, i waved my hand and shouted to stop the ship, then one man from that ship saw and i thanked to GOD that i was safe and back to home.

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  12. Yesterday I visited the great Amazon rainforest in South America. As our helicopters landed I observed thousands of different kinds of plants provide food and shelter for millions of different types of animals. The Amazon was crawling with lives.

    According to our plans I was walking in the Amazon with my camp mates. Suddenly I noticed a way going covered with many orchids on which some red birds were sitting. I forget every thing and followed the way. As I as was going further I was loosing my self in the Amazon. Suddenly I realized that where am I? I was lost with neither food nor any camp. I just had a pocket knife. As I noticed the sun setting I got scared. I was hungry, tired and frightened of dangerous species. As I saw an apple plant I used my knife to cut them and have them as dinner. Some how I spent my night terrified of hidden hunters and soil living bugs. Next morning I was running through the forest, suddenly I saw the Amazon River. I was very happy because a river means rafters who can help me. Well the day passed, I didn’t found any rafter but I got a match box. I then created fire in the bushes so that my camp mates can get signals of me. After a while I saw my helicopter throwing ladder for me to climb.

    I thanked GOD that I was saved. Then our head decided to go back. We headed towards our country.

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  13. There was my cousin birthday was taking place in Canada .he invited me so my father was busy in work so he allowed me to go with my older cousen,my passport was come. i asked my father that i have to go to my cousen birthday as having a problem so my ticket confirmed suddenly so i took only my 4 pant shire and went to airport,during flight a report came by airhostress that the fuel pipe had leaked so we have to in sea near an island, or the plain will crash, i was too scared, that i will be able to swim or not, but i jumped and reached island. i was too hungry but had nothing instead of a pocket knife, i found a coconut and cut it from my pocket knife and drunk its water and ate the coconut, suddenly i saw a ship going, i waved my hand and shouted to stop the ship, then one man from that ship saw and i thanked to GOD that i was safe and back to home.([{shayan asif}])

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  14. Yesterday my friend and I went for a trip. I saw many monkeys who were playing with basket ball. We all were amazed to see. There were many trees of bananas, mango, pomegranate and apple. Our plan was that to stay for two to three days. For dinner we did BBQ. For our safety we took two weapons, pocket knife and pistol. When we were sleeping at night we heard horror voices. We couldn’t understand what to do???My friend had an idea that to start firing. He started firing. Suddenly the owner came and started shouting what are you doing??? Then the problem was solved. We enjoyed very much.

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  15. 1 week before, I went to visit some Rainforests In South Africa. I was in my safari Bus And Taking Photos Of Beautiful Flowers. I was in the middle of this When My eye caught something. A multicolor Butterfly with beautiful wings. I Forgot about everything and towards it. I flew into the deeper Jungle i thought that nobody will ever know that I went in there and I will be back in 5 minutes. Thinking this, she went into the jungle. Then she went inside the deep jungle and caught the butterfly after she turned to return there was no sign of anything no trace, no path, I stood there in horror . then I walked around and tried to escape the jungle but I couldn’t. I was all alone. One thing that made me happy was I was near a pond of water but I had no shelter or food. There was very little chance of survival. I only had a pocket knife with me. I used it to cut two bamboo sticks and 4 big leaves. I used them to make a kind of shelter with the bamboo stickes supporting the leaves. I know had little hope of survival.i decided to spend the night and look for more things in the morning . I was woken by a beam of scorching sunlight getting in my eyes. I looked around and remembered that I was lost . suddenly I heard the sound of a helicopter . I couldn’t belive my eyes when I saw the big “RESCUE 111” written beneath the helicopter.it had really come for me!!!.they threw a ladder and a got hold of it instantly. I know was felling very happy. I thanked the recue team and returned home
    Written by Muhammad Salih 7n

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  16. Phew!
    Oh God Teacher,
    i did it in such a hurry that iam sweatin' rite now !
    plz read it complete
    ive put in much effort in it :)

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  17. day before yesterday i went to thar desert where we went with whole family and cousins.we went to the corner of the desert where there was only water so suddenly there was a noise and everybody started running but I was seeing at the other side so I didn’t saw them I only had a knife with me so I started finding everybody but I went to the wrong side to find them and I reached to a place where there were only 2 things which were a coconut tree and a lake so I was thirsty and I drank the water of lake and cut some coconuts.it was getting dark in the night but there was nothing.i slept on the sand and woke up the next day and found no body but after some time a helicopter was coming towards me and i waved my hand and they saw me and came and took me home.

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  18. shukkar ho gaya.teacher i was doing it and the load shedding had so i did it now at 4.47

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  19. January 12 2012:
    Some days before I went for a research in a tropical rainforest with my team and there we had alot of fun. As we arrived there I observed many long tress which were actually divided in to 4 layers.The tallest one was Emergents,then Canopy,then Under canopy and then shrub layer which are also called Earth floor.

    As I move forward suddenly I found my self between a big maze....... All around me were only tall and thick branches and I was just alone. I quickly thought to take out my cell phone but unfortunately my bag was with my mates.I started crying and ran to search my mates but it was of no use,I kept shouting but no one could hear my voice. The sun was drowning slowly an I was very hungry and thristy.intellectualy I saw a knife in my pocket and a coconut on the earth floor which i peeled and controlled my hunger. I was very frightened for my family they would be waiting for me. After words it got to dark that i could not even see the thing next to me and suddenly I saw a scorching light behind the trees. I screamed loudly so some one could help me and fortunatly that was the leader of our group and he took me to the camp then I thanks to Allah that he blessed me.

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  20. 1 week before i visited an island with my family there me and my sister were playing hide and see while playing I went so far that my sister couldn’t find me, it was to late every one went back to home and I was hiding on that place when in came back I didn’t find my family there was no one and I was only having a pocket knife even I was not having food and shelter but there were many trees of fruits for 2 days I was staying over there without food and shelter then in my mind a trick came that I should make a small hut for me of sticks and should have some fruits from trees then I hade a friend ship with monkeys for 3 days they bring fruits for me from trees, I wash from the island water then I cut them and I eat that fruits with monkeys in that hut which was made by me and monkeys yhen I saw my family coming I shouted and went to them when I came to my home I was missing those monkeys alot because they helped me a lot.one thing I realized that we should not go so far without telling our parents.

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  21. sorry teacher its 16 minutes late because i was doing work :(

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  22. Im in a ship and the ship trembles. I go out to see what happen and I saw that the ship was going towards an iceberg. I told the captain so he can turn the ship but it was too late. the ship hit the ice berg and it the ship was blown in to pieces, scattering everyone.
    I woke up and looked around and I saw jungle everywhere. One day has been passed since the ship has gone. I made shelter by trees + made weapons from wood and stone. I hunted food by killing tiger, rabbit and fish. I slept very difficultly because I was so exhausted. Next day I saw a ship which took me to Pakistan.
    Written by Tayyab Asif.

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  23. one day I was in a air plain and I was sitting at the window seat and suddenly i saw a storm but I just ignored it so after Min I was feeling dizzy because the plain was going up and down so i went to the wash room and i started to faint.
    after i woke up i was in a jungle lost where i couldn't see noting without trees i was starting to die but just when i saw a waterfall so i went there and started to drink water then started to hunt animals then at the end of the day i maked a rescue sign so they could save me so at the morning of the next day a helicopter came and took me home again

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  24. my eyes opened slowly i was blank but suddenly i began to memorise scene of the plane when i was walking towards thne pilot cabinet when sauddely plane began to shake and with in a few second plane crashed and every thing vanished from my eyes.i immediately stoof up balancing myself and looked across the land.its was a JUNGLE!and people lyng there were dead.i was really panicked and i went toward the wood.there were many branches and leaves so i cleard them with my my pocket knife and made the way .after walking alot i felt thristy and started searching for water.after a while a river flowing and grabbed a coconut shell to get myslef water.later a helicopter appeared and i yelled for help.they saw me and came for the help for survivors of plane crash.as only i was only lucky survivor so they landed and took me up there in helicopter.we had a converstion about what happened i narrated themm all i knew.And finally went back to my home.

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